Rephrase the following examples so that consecutive sentences do not include the word but. Remember that there is no single way to revise each answer successfully. You may compare your answers to the sample revisions below each question. See section C18 for more details and examples.

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Rephrase the following passage so that consecutive sentences do not include the word but.

There is no question that the Padres on balance have lost run-scoring potential by replacing Smith, Jones, and Brown with Martinez, Womack, and White. But the team has gained better defence and a more positive attitude. But it is not clear whether these will be enough to enable them to win the World Series championship that has so far eluded them.

   

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